Please make sure that you look at all of this feedback and apply it to your writing. I have chosen to put it all together in one document as all of you need to take a look at your work with these pointers in mind.
Happy writing!!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kJAchVuXFu79nVSQWwzEyPI_Af0AVRO3vVVouaAhmcU/edit
